ingilizcesi nice olanlar baksın bi

olm bi suru kucuk hata var okuyan her turlu anlar ama var yani hatalar zinciri

edit: duzeltmeler yaptigim yerleri mavilestirdim panpa. bazi yerleri sil bastan komple degigib yazardim ama bana essay yaziyormussun gibi geldi o yuzden de cok dokunmak istemedim. ozellikle snin seviyeni bilen biri okuyacaksa cok siritir. bisey lazim olursa yaz panpa. yardim edebilirsem ne ala

most of the people want to live in a big city. everyone has a good reason that can be education or job or money. all of them are acceptable reasons. besides some people want to live in their village but generally old or retired people want that.

firstly burada nasil girmek istedin panpa , my parents had moved to izmir when they were children. day by day, big cities’ populations are increasing in turkey so traffic jam and air pollution started to be a big problem for all people in my city. after all i like to live in izmir do bu do nun burada ne yaptigini cozemedim inan i can’t imagine how i would live in a village. i get used gecmis zaman istiyorsan get yerine got olacak to noise, and chaos of city. i like to go crowded bars with my friend. when i went to the summer house, i started to be bored after 2 months.

on the other hand, i was born in a big city where i have grown up, but i have seen my mother’s village two or three times in my life. there are a few village houses, and great fruit gardens. they live simple so they don t care their outlook or they aren t interested in expensive furnitures or luxury cars. they just grow vegetables and raise animals for food. that situation is providing them to eating organic foods because of this they live long. they are happy with their fresh air and, quiet life, and they think, they could not live in a big city because of city’s population.

to sum up ozet olarak filan demek istersen in summary daha iyidir, i think, it is according to people’s habits. you want to live in a big city or a village where you have grown up. both of these have advantages, and disadvantages. you can live long and peaceful ,if you live where you want to live.